Sunday, March 28, 2010

Exquisite Corpse Experiment (Alex & Patrycja)


Alex (Greenspan) and I created this after an epic waffle breakfast this morning. For those who aren't familiar with the poetry game, we each wrote a few lines and then folded over the paper so that we could only see the other person's last line. And Voila!:

Waiting for Waffles
This opus of a halfling: half-eaten half-life
core, shaped flower, shaped cunt

seeds patient, or dawdling. Decent? Darling
am I decent? Is it
crispy? Resentment flows
like pancake batter; feel it
between your toes and
that other soft space, roof of the mouth;
the underside of some steamed lid:
we’re cooking bow-tie pasta, darling,
sautéing anxieties on the side.
                        Sorry about the tattoos
            and the miniatures; the butter-
            knife wounds I never shared:
            can we still be friends?

Can we still sit--all dimples and clenched teeth
            and squirming toes?
            Watch for blueberries
underfoot; thorns and dragonflies;
love and reading-glasses.
We wish we could wait, unassuming,
the way a browning artichoke does
                        head chopped off,
head atop the slender neck

of a vase. Dead chess set. Herniated
            piano-fake eyelashes. The cranes
                        are drying. A poem is cooking.
                                    Let simmer until supple.

1 comment:

  1. I think we should put break up the second stanza such that it reads:

    seeds patient, or dawdling. Decent? Darling
    am I decent? Is it
    crispy? Resentment flows
    like pancake batter; feel it
    between your toes and
    that other soft space, roof of the mouth;
    the underside of some steamed lid:
    we’re cooking bow-tie pasta, darling,
    sautéing anxieties on the side. Sorry

    about the tattoos
    and the miniatures; the butter-
    knife wounds I never shared:
    can we still be friends?

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