Help me!

Hi y'all. Sorry I haven't posted (ever), I promise I'll be different from now on!
Here are two poems I wanted to put in my chapbook but that I have not edited. So please be brutal and honest with your comments.
Thanks, see y'all tomorrow in class!


Romancing the Button

What do you rub on?
it’s a failed

quote-droid
your ass is glorified
and it’s an issue
pretty mean, I am not a mile
stretched out on a lion
cows on Wednesdays
and the wigs
are freaking me out

the waves went on
forever


Into the Pan

any plastic one
freaked out
long metal
pick your own nose
pogo stick on the lawn
monkey bars and
kokopellis
don’t think straight

we’re in the water
chicken wheat paste
in a pickle
someone else?
I’m going to vomit.
Pauly Shore,
you’re on my leg and
it hurts.